“Where is your mother?” Friday thought he heard his father’s voice ask.
Obiora stepped out of the cluttered room he shared with his wife and youngest son, and stumbled slowly into the adjoining living room, while bemoaning the heat in their small and cramped apartment. Being a father of five children meant there was no privacy or free space in his house, but he was used to the dynamics of his family.
He sat on the only fully leathered armchair in the room, running his tired eyes round the room, before finally settling his gaze on his two sons. They were lying down on the flat mattress they slept on every night, engrossed in crossword puzzles from the discarded newspapers he regularly brought home.
Obiora’s body was hot. His throat was sore, and the pressure he felt in his chest was heavy. Maybe I’m thinking too much, he thought to himself. Who would blame him though? Since the day he drove his Oga home from the airport upon Oga’s return from Italy, he had been out of a job. Oga had given him a little stipend and told him his services would not be required until the lockdown was lifted. Unfortunately, they already exhausted the money.
He was grateful for the little income his wife brought home daily from the sales of food in the market, though he had to admit his ego suffered a blow. Obiora had never felt so useless and hungry in his life. “Why are you not at work? You want your Oga to start shouting again abi?”
Friday, the eldest of his sons, raised his head to look at his father. “Tailors are not allowed to work sir. Our shops are also on lockdown.”
Obiora nodded and continued his soliloquy, while his youngest son stared at him.
“Papa is not going to work because of corona shey?” Emeka asked his older brother.
Friday merely nodded.
“But why? Is corona not for only rich people?”
“I wonder too oh”. Na dem e suppose catch as na dem dey travel out. Friday shrugged his shoulders while deep in thoughts. “Oya go and tell Nneka that papa is awake. He will need his food.”
“But the food will not be enough if Papa eats like he does, and I’m hungry too.”
Friday glared at his younger brother, and the latter scrambled for the front door immediately. Friday picked a newspaper to fan himself, as he cursed the power company in his mind. “Ordinary three months’ bill that we are owing, these people still cut our light.”
Obiora smiled at his eldest son’s rambling, although the words sounded so far away. He stared at his swollen hands and feet, before deciding to lie down and think of a way to break the news to his wife. He didn’t have the money to go to the hospital, but he was sure he knew what was wrong with him.
“Where is your mother?” Friday thought he heard his father ask once again.
© AKANNO RAYMOND, June 2020.
Image Credit@PIXABAY
Thank you Fada Kay for given me the opportunity to discover this new gift. It all started with a little optimism. Am grateful for this platform.
Interesting concise
You did well bro. Nice piece
Nice one bro
Nice and interesting.
This is so inspiring ????, nice story.
Great piece.
You are gradually turning into a prolific writer @Akanno Peter.
Do keep it up
Such A Touching Story
A very nice piece. With the suspense at the end, one can only wait to know what happened next.
Nice one
Nice update
I am waiting for the next episode…
Nice content ????????????????
“JUST FOR THE RICH?”
Great piece, so inspiring.
Where is his mother now? The young man has Corona…lol. Nice one Raymond. More power to your elbow..
Beautiful piece
Beautiful article. Strong message.
Wow
Short
Interesting and understandable
But please o
Covid-19 is not for the rich ppl only
This is a very nice piece. Well done bro.
Lovely story,
Gave me a memory about the lockdown endurance
I got angry at some point that the rich brought it on us and we the average persons are getting to suffer for it.
Thanks Iyke
Nice piece Raymond.
Nice piece that captured the plights of the average Nigerian Family in the face of the pandemic.
God bless the writer.
INTERESTING WRITE UP
Good write-up . Suspense filled.
Fantastic read. Great story telling.
Nice story.
Amazing story, very relatable and interesting.
Short and enlightening. Good job????
Short and informative.
Wonderful story ….gave me a memory of the lockdown saga which got frustrating at some point thinking the virus was for the rich and they brought it upon us, so the average Nigerians shouldn’t get the suffer for it all.
Thanks iyke
This is lovely. I really enjoyed reading this.
Great content
Thanks for this iyke
Good one indeed Iyke! Critically examine the mentioned symptoms and associate it with what lead to lock down in relation to first sets of patient’s experiences/symptoms. Fantastic write up
Thank you Oga mi. Subsequently, if opportunity presents, we will make a linkage.
God bless you sir.
More power to your elbow sir . U are such a great intellect
Interesting write up
Nice one bro.
Such a wonderful piece
The story has succinctly put in the right perspective the misconception of an average Nigerian family about Covid-19
Keep it up Iyke
Nice piece Ray, it depicts a typical Nigerian family.
Nice story Mr. Akanno. So touching
I really like your choice of words and writing style. Generally, it was a captivating story.
Nice piece AKANNO!
What a great write up!
This is an award winner in the making. Perfect use of words in a very touching story.
So touching and this is what so many families have been passing through since this covid 19 pandemic, especially families where both parents are privately employed, imagine some private schools have not paid their teachers for 3months now, cos students re not around.
Creative…nice one @Akanno
Wow…this is so good Iyke, keep it up brother
Beautiful write, it brought the feeling of what or feels like to struggle in some Nigerian homes. Thank you for this, can’t wait for the next episode.
Nice… Thumbs up
Perfect piece.. Beautiful write up Iyke.
You never cease to say the most captivating stories.
Award winning. Well done
Nice one keep it up
This story not only depict the mental effect of the pandemic on most average Nigerian, it brought out the generalised wrong idea that covid 19 was for the rich alone.
Suspense filled and captivating.
Weldone RAYMOND
Nice piece
This is a beautifully crafted piece. Well done Akanno.
Beautifully done
Nice piece Iyke
Nice piece
Nice ????
This is a very lovely and nice write up, I can’t wait to read the next one… Nice one raymond
Amazing write up…..thrilled reading through
For once, the rich and the poor realize that this plight is not tailor-made.
This is an interesting piece. I enjoyed every bit of it. Well done Akanno????
Quite a piece pub sec. Your skill are never in doubt.
I hope we all get back to our lives pretty soon
A whole lot of individuals are suffering because of this pandemic.
We pray God heal the land.
Wow.. never knew you had this extra gift. Interesting
Amazing write-up. This gets a 4 star rating.
Really Inspiring… nice one Iyke
Wow…..nice one
Akanno’s story is precise and concise. Beautiful story!
This is really happening… Many homes today face these chalenges…
Fine story IK
Nice story son. Keep the pen rolling.
The story really tells the situation of things in the country in this pandemic.
The untold suffering of the average family.
The writer really penned down so much in the short story.
Kudos Akanno
Next episode please….Nice one iyke
Wow… Nice Piece ????????
Expository.
.
The story has brought out every average individuals thinking and got it penned down just as it is.
Kudos Brother
Nicely written Sir. You’re doing well
Wow. Nicely written. You’re doing well sir!
Beautiful piece..I love d suspense at the end????
Really said it all in there
Nice one
Precise! Paints a clear picture
This is wonderful, explicit picture of the reality!
Nice piece Iyke
Beautifully penned. Good one Iyke
A great woman there, that supported the family with a her daily income even when the husband had no job, I wish growing ladies would learn from that too.
It’s indeed a nice piece telling what some homes in Africa face as a result of life challenges and struggles.
Lovely piece Iyke….next episode
This is a lovely piece…
A masterpiece… Totally enjoyed it
A wonderful writeup.
Okay, so you managed to combine humour with a theme that’s naturally Depressing. Thank you Raymond.
I feel some of the non-English words could have been italicized, but you passed your point across and that’s what matters.
Welldone Iyke.
The apt imagery portrayed by the writer in this scintillating piece is one to be applauded. The good use of imagery allows the readers to also share the little house of Obiora with their family, giving the readers a share of their experience in what a typical Nigerian poor home looks like.
Why applauding this good piece of fiction it is important to also mark out a few errors in the punctuations and quotations.
Nonetheless, this is a fiction that every Nigerian can relate to at a first read which makes it a masterpiece of work. Kudos to the writer.
Thanks Chief for ur critical criticism. Will sure get to make corrections to get better.
A poignant read this is… Highlighting the travails of the average Nigerian family who still lack access to Universal Health Coverage especially in a pandemic situation like we are currently experiencing. Kudos bro, for telling a story that needs to be heard.
O.A.
The fact that this fiction relates to Nigerian lives is what makes it a glistening piece of work. The dialogue among Obiora and Friday was well constructed signifying the indebtedness of their relationship as father and son also at the same time it shows that both Obiora and Friday has a lot they don’t share with each other. A typical household problem among parents and their children.
As much as the piece is great, it would have been superb if the writer used more of literary devices to spice up this great work of fiction.
However, this is a very great work of fiction from a brilliant writer.
The fact that this fiction relates to Nigerian lives is what makes it a glistening piece of work. The dialogue among Obiora and Friday was well constructed signifying the indebtedness of their relationship as father and son also at the same time it shows that both Obiora and Friday has a lot they don’t share with each other. A typical household problem among parents and their children.
As much as the piece is great, it would have been superb if the writer used more of literary devices to spice up this great work of fiction.
However, this is a very great work of fiction from a brilliant writer.
Lovely piece. Although I think there is still room for corrections. The word “round” in “running his tired eyes round the room” could be changed with ” around” or the entire phrase could be substituted with ” his tired eyes scanned the room”… Just a thought tho
Overall I enjoyed the piece
The piece brings to light the issues faced by poor Nigerians while COVID-19 is being politicized. I enjoyed it.
Great piece!
Depicts the life and times of the average Nigerian family.
However, one may get lost in the pool of many characters in the piece.
Overall, it’s a good work!
Wahoo… Such a nice one to read.. kudos Iyke
This is quite masterpiece filled with strong imageries making a reflection of the unspoken and unimaginable situations in the home of an average Nigerian.
I love the used of figures, use of expressions and words here, This is real inspiring piece.
A quick salient question
“Is Covid 19 only for the rich”?
Ths current trends and transmission rate has really given us the answer.
As individuals, poor or rich, maks effort to stop the transmission.
#TakeResponsibility
More grease brother!
Wow, this is really interesting. Nice one
Great write up Ikechukwu Akanno. I trust you will do well when given the opportunity. Great job.
This is worth my time.
Amazing
Great read!
nice piece